Tuesday, June 13, 2006

Love Haiku-Style.

Her presence froze me
cold winds smoothed her rough edges
i could not unthaw

peace.

6 comments:

The Brown Blogger said...

and I betcha still stuck

Powerful the haiku is.

Keem em' coming

MZPEACH said...

I like it!

brwn_eyes_brwngirl said...

nice. :)

Brea said...

nice

VerseOne said...

no doubt Hassan, even though i unthawed enough to ask her to marry me though.

Anonymous said...

short and sweet! I love it!