i decided to post a poem, but since i didn't want to post some old stuff i figured i'd try and freestyle one.... wish me luck.
i'll make it a love poem...
i want a love that moves me forward.
i want a love that teaches,
reaches,
stretches,
and caresses
me.
i want a love that touches,
clutches,
envelops,
and develops
me.
i want a love,
that shower's me.
shower's me like a summer rain,
both cooling my soul,
and leaving remnants of its presence for all to see.
i want a love,
that empower's me,
emboldens me,
embeds itself in me,
a love that empties me.
i want a love that tells me when it's time to stop, look, and listen...
Peace.
10 comments:
that was good. you must freestyle more. i actually got see someone perform that poem.
you and me both:)
word.
thanks ya'll. a couple of ya'll be puttin' it down on the poetry, so i definitely try and keep up.
Peace.
You freestyle quite well, nice poem.
sheeeit. :)
I like it..the best poems always come from a freestyle, cause they are candid, fresh and whats in your mind at the moment.
Peace
mos def, brwn_eyes. i find that if i spend too much time thinking on a poem it becomes a bunch of different things, just cuz i have different thoughts every day.
peace.
Wow, I liked it. I really like that Verse.
I feel this piece!
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