Monday, January 30, 2006

Ten Lines response.

It took One second for me to
Have visions of us Two
Meeting on Three planes of thought
Sharing Four-play
While screaming the Five syllables of your name
With my Six senses enthralled by
Seven soft kisses placed
On my Eight sweet spots
Sending me to cloud Nine.

All this from Ten feet away.

Peace

8 comments:

VerseOne said...

This poem was inspired by Nikki , check her out.

Peace.

Superstar Nic said...

I love it!

I love Nikki to. She is a GREAT writer!

nikki said...

and i'm STILL grinning over that reply.

MZPEACH said...

Loved it.

Anonymous said...

I like

josie said...

sweet reply.

Unknown said...

That's a tight response.

Ms.Honey said...

I loved it!! Great collab!!